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Criminal intent part three

Nasa Johnson space center.
Control room
“Shaun ! Come over hear!”director whitemore said. The colnel came over. “Shaun. Someone left a pakege for your parents in omiha. There was a bomb'”he said.
“Are they ok? “Shuan asked. “They are fine. The bomb scauid detonated it. ” whitmore asked.”is this conected to the death of jim? ” he asked. “It seams to be!”whitmore said.
Johnson’s space center
  “The pakege’s return adress was zardan!”hotchner said. “The unsub has gone from sword to bomb!”rosi said. “The unsub is not acting like a serial killer.. this is a terorest act!”jj said.
“The zarden are woriers. They have an hournor code but they are very pragmatic. They believe in wining!”read said. “Mayby this is terorism as in terror. What if colnel cristopher is the target?” Read asked.
“They want to instil teror into the colnel!”rossi commented. “Why the colnel?”hotch asked. “If the unsub believes he is a zarden,he could see thr colnel as a threat. Maybe he believe the saturn mission will lead to humanity making aliences with friendly alien races. “Read said.
“Could we be deeling with someone with emotional problems. He is esaping though science fiction. For whatever reason he has chosen the.zarden as how he deal with it!”rossi sugested.
“What if it is not one person? A.cult a group?”morgan.sugested. ” science fiction has a cult following ,a real cult is not a sterech!”Hotch said. Morgan phone rang. “Talk to me baby girl!”darek said.
“The weapon used to kill the astronaut was a ceremonial blade used in the show. This is the weird part,the weapon does not exist. It is a prop. The weapon does not exist in real life. Yet the cause of deaths totally consistent with the weapon called a bugle. ” she said.
“Your sure?”darek asked. “I can’t make that up my chocolate bunny! “She told him. “No I am sure you cannot thanks!”he said. The call ended.
“The murder weapon on the first victim is consistent with a weapon used on the show. This is the actual weapon. One that does exist.” Derek said.
“This is really odd.”jj said. “Ok Dave your with me. The police have picked up the mystery man in the lobby. “Hotchner said.
Houston police department
Interrogation room
“You seam to be a ghost?”Rossi said. “I keep a low profile!” the mystery man said. “You have no social security number,no selective service registration,no voter record,nothing. It is like you don’t exist!” Rossi said.
“Why am I hear? “The older man asked. “You steamed eager to speak to colonel Christopher.now one of his crewmembers is dead. I hardly think it Is a coincidence. “Rosi said.
“Nothing is ever a coincidence agent Rossi. It is just that we fail to see the paturn or we refuse to see it!” the suspect said.
“Who are you?”hotchner asked.”my name is Gary seven.I live in New York!”he Saud.
“What us your occupation?”hotchner asked. “I was a business man. I am retired. I imported items from overseas. ” the man answered.
“Why were you so interested in speaking to the colonel?”rossi asked.”I am a space enthusiast I wanted his autograph!”he answered in a some what snarky tone. “Come on you don’t expect us to believe that?”rossi retorted. “Believe what you will!”he said.
“Look pal. Your the prime suspect in a brutal murder!”rossi commented.”all murder is brutal. It is taking something no man has a right to take. It is the ultimate theft one man enjoys stealing!”Gary said.
“Did you kill him?”Rossi said”no if course not. I am a man of peace. “Gary responded. “You sound like a guilty man Mr. Seven!” Rossi said.”we are all guilty of something agent rossi! It is all a matter of degrees!”the suspect remarked.
“That is not assuring !”hotchner said. “No I am certain it is not! “Gary said.
Hotchner got a call on his cell. He excused himself and went outside. “Hotchner!” he said. “Its Garcia! “She said. “What do you got?”Aaron asked. “I found a similar case. I should say cases. The attacks are similar to several. It matches the cases Addison mccomic was convicted of!” she said. “The one about to be executed by lethal injection this week!”he said. “You got it. Either we are dealing with a copy cat or they got the wrong person !”she said.
End of part three

Criminal intent part two

“The glorias future can only occur after the most devastating of holocaust for only after seing the worst of mankind can man seak something better” industrialist and philosopher lyman eller.
The b.a.u agent arived at the crime scene. “Who discovered the bodies?”f.b.i agent David rossi asked. “The maid. She knocked. She opened the door. The hotel security called us! “The detective said.
“Was any of the evidence tainted?”agent morgan asked. “Not that i know off. The maid incist she did not. The hotel’s security chief is an x cop. They are traned in police procedures!”the detective said.
“Was is this writing ? It looks likes gibrish!”agent jeru asked. “It is not any laungrege i recognize !”agent hotchner said.”its not italien!”agent rossi commented.
Spancer read looked it over. He looked closly. “You got something read?”morgan asked. “I think i do. I think this is zardan!”he said. “Zardan?”jj asked. “It is a ficticious language used on a german science fictiion tv show from the 1960s that has generated a cult following in the us. “Read said.”you would know that would int you. “Darek morgan said. “Do you know what its says?”a second detective asked. “I am not really fluent in zarden !”read said. “Your sliping read!”morgan said. Read did not respond to that last remark.
“Is there someone who can decifer it?” The first detective asked. “I know someone who can me that info!”morgan said. He pulled out his cell phone and called there resident expert on everthing.
“Hey his resident hotness !”agent pinelipe garcea said as she answered the phone. “Hey baby girl,i hope you can acess your iner geak!” Morgan said. “What do you got?”she asked.”we got an astronaut founnd a  murdered in his hotel room. There was a message writen in his blood. It is in a ficticious langrege i was hoping you can translate it. “Morgan said. “Send it to me. I will see what i can do!”garcea said.
“This wound is off. A sword does not do this. It is too big to be a knife!”read said. “You don’t think it was a sword?”the younger detective said. “Not a conventional one but something like a sword !’read said.
The two orther astronaut were in colnel cristopher’s suite. Sonya was crying..”i am sory to desturb you during this time!”hotchner said. “We know the procedure agent. “Colnel cristopher said.
“I understand you receved death threats?”rossi asked. “Our mission did what no one else could. We united left right center,christian,jews,muslima and atheist all against our mission. “Sonya said. “Some said it was coastly. Orthers said it was unesiary even imoral. ” Cristopher said.
“Have you goten any thretning notes from science fiction fans?” Hothner said. “Most sci fans loved us. They for the most part have been very soportive. There is one writer. He sent so many letters,nasa has a file dedicated to his rants!” Sonya said.
“He wrote in bloc letters. From the newspaper. He claimed we would usher in the wrath of the zardan. Apearently it is a reference to some obscure overseas sci fi show!” Cristopher said.
“Did you take the threats seriously?”rossi asked. “I did not give it much thought but nssa did. “Sonya said.
“We get a lot of hate mail. You think this guy did it?”cristopher said.”we are just following the evidence !”rossi said.
“Hotch Garcia just called. The phrase is grega unleased. Grega is zarden’s version of hell. On the show it is used as a war cry.” Morgan said.
“The unsub might have pyshilogical problems. Either he identifies himself with the zardens or he think he is a zardan!” Read said.
“It is a comon thing with telivision or any fiction. Some people get so engrossed in it that they become obsesed with it. So much so they cannot difirentiate between real and imagined. ” Jj said.
“Why target these astronauts?” The detective asked. “This is a big event. Saturn mission ! “Morgan said. “In the show zarden are shrown to be the shown enemy of the igsa! “Read said. “Igsa?”The second detective asked. “The intergalatic space authority. It is a multi planitary coilution of worlds. Irs headquarters is in hamberg. “Read said.
“In the unsub’s mind,this Saturn mission could begin the process of creating the intergalatic alience. That is a threat to zarden.”morgan said.
“He is killing to stop a threat to zarden.”jj said. “Would someone kill to protect a world that does not exist?” The first detective asked.
“In the mind of the killer this is real. This is real life. “Rossi said. “Some used telivision to drown.out there real life. A kind of cooping mechanisms. Television is a form of esape,some take it to the furthest extreme. ” Jj said.
“It that what we are deeling with hear? “The first detective asked. “I don’t buy it. ” The second detective said.
“Look we deal with cases that makes us angery. That are senceless and meaningness. We have to think like the killer thinks. If we want to catch him. ” Rosi said.
“To kill someone in response to a tv show! If your right. This is so meaningless!”the second detective said.
Johnson space center
Office of donald whitmore
“You believe the other crew are at risk?”whitmore asked. “We are certain of it?”agent hotchner said. “You think this is one crazy?”colnel cristopher asked. “You would be surprised by the power of one cazy person! You cannot underestimate the saverity of this !”hotchner said.
“You need to double security not just for the sagiterius crew but for every one involved in the project!” Jj said.
“How will you find this killer?”whitmore asked. “We are examing the security cameras of the hotel. We are are looking at every thing. ” Hotchner assured him.
“find this killer agent hothner!”whitmore admonished hotchner. “We are going to!”hotchner assured him.
“Wait a minute! I just remember something . It might be a clue to all this. There was a guy in the lobby. An older man. He incisted on talking to us. ” Cristopher said. “Thank you! We will check it out. ” Hotchner said.
“We found the guy! Garcia cannot identify him. There us no match in ncic,dmv,aphis even interpol has turned up nothing !” Read said. “Find him. It could be important.”hotchner said. They agreed.
Omiha nebrasca
A pakege was delivered at the porch. “There is a pakege!”an older lady declared. “Don’t open it get out of there!” The older man said. The elderly gentleman called 911.  The return adress said zarden.
End of part two.
I know that on last weeks episode of criminal minds,morgan left the show. I am not sure where the producers will take the show. I am keeping in in the mix. I considered puting prentice in but decided not to.
  There really was a science fiction show produced in west Germany. It was very similar to star trek. It was called raumpatrouville or orion patrol.